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Instructor provided this little paragraph and we are supposed to find the errors and I am not great at finding errors like that

Our instructor provided this little piece of writing and wanted us to find errors in it according to the 7th edition of the APA manual.  He graded them last night and I am not well at grammar and stuff.  So, since I didn’t get a great grade on my, he said I can resubmit my assignment today for a better grade if I find errors in the paper.  So, if you could help me find errors in it that I could submit to him for a better grade  today as early as possible. Thank you.

Learning how to properly format in APA style

Victor S. Callou, MA

Department of Exercise Science and Sport Studies, California University of Pennsylvania

PRF 700: Orientation to Exercise Science and Health Promotion

Dr. Edward T. Batton

June. 10, 2020

It has always been known that the APA style of writing is widely accepted within the academic community.  The writing style allows for consistency and a uniform application of style rules across disciplines.   Many experts predict an uptick in the overall utilization of the APA format, now that the seventh edition has been published (Papel, Jones, et al.).  Updates to the new edition include a long-waited updated section on bias-free language (Papel & Jones).  The writer is hopeful the writing style will be adapted by all academic units within the university.

References

Papel, M., Jones, H, Smith, L., & Taylor, A. (2012). Nuances of the APA seventh edition.  International Scholarly Writing Journal Network, 127 (1), 14-22.  https://internationalwiriting.org/publications-volume-31