“analyze” the Rhetorical Strategies

I have wrote an essay but it looks like it’s not good enough. I will upload the essay and I want from you to edit it and if there is something wrong change it please Here is what is the instructions for the essay: you are going to write an essay in which you “analyze” the Rhetorical Strategies used by 1-3 published writers or public speakers who address issues within your Semester Topic. What kind of diction and language do they use? Is their writing or discourse directed at an highly educated or less educated audience? Do they rely on a formal or informal structure and tone? Do they include real-world people, events, stories, and examples to help connect with their audiences? What kinds of emotions do they illicit from their readers or viewers? How do they create and illicit these emotions? The Module II Essay will be five (6) pages long and observe the standard MLA guidelines that we discussed in Modules I & II. Also, because you will be doing research, you will need to include a Bibliography/Works Cited plus In-Text Citations to show your research sources. NOTE HERE: I want from you to add the following in the essay: 1. In-Text Citations to show your research sources. ( I don’t Know how to do this so please add the in- text citation to the essay) 2. -Section “Sub-Headers” (Short Titles for each section in the “body” of the essay. You can also give the Conclusion a simple Sub-Header such as the word Conclusion.) 3. -The Bibliography (or Works Cited) should include all of the books and outside resources used in the essay. ( I add this so just please make sure of it)