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Thesis statement:

Families should have the privilege to choose

because

without health insurance

,

they won’t go to hospital

, and

unemployment affects their health status

Revise your first body paragraph to include in-text citations and analysis of your evidence where needed. Paragraphs should be 5–7 sentences.

1.Draft your first paragraph to develop supporting point 1, which was:

without health insurance, why family without health insurance will not be allow to choose any doctor of their kind

. Body paragraphs should be 5–7 sentences and include a topic sentence, evidence, and analysis. Cite sources

2.Draft your second paragraph to develop supporting point 1. Cite sources

3. Draft your first paragraph to develop supporting point 2, which was:

they won’t go to hospital. people won’t go hospital with the fear of being uninsured

. Body paragraphs should include a topic sentence, evidence, and analysis. Cite sources

4.Draft your second paragraph to develop supporting point 2.

5. Draft your first paragraph to develop supporting point 3, which was:

unemployment affects their health status

. Body paragraphs should include a topic sentence, evidence, and analysis. Cite sources

6.Draft your second paragraph to develop supporting point 3

7. Draft a paragraph of 5–7 sentences that addresses at least one counter perspective to your position. Cite sources. The counter perspective from your outline is:

Reduced cost on health insurance.

write your conclusion paragraph. Remember to restate your thesis and leave readers with a lasting impression. Your paragraph should be 5–7 sentences.

List four sources

instruction

Include a cover page with the assignment name, your name, the course name,

Number your pages.

Use double-spacing.

Indent the beginning of each paragraph.

Use 12-point Times New Roman font.

Use one-inch margins

It should exactly the way it is with the numbers