4 pages please about the issue of not having interfaith dialogue on campus | Quick Homework Help

I’m studying and need help with a English question to help me learn.

I attached for you the fist essay that you did last week the teacher grade it and it need some correction please take alokk and correct when it is need(you will find them in red)

and then I need you to add more 4 pages to this essay that you already did

what i need you to do is add the result of the essay which is about the result of the interfaith dialogues survey.

so now you will need to write the outcome of the servery and your recommendations about how to have good interfaith dialogues on campus(i send you the survey result is below too)

here are some recommendations that i want you to use and you can add more to them

to have interfaith dialogues on campus:

1- Select topics that are interesting and get people attention.

2- Create more programs for interfaith dialogues.

3- Find a way of getting people to attend the event.

Also you can add outside sources about other result or solution that happen in another campus

and please compound or gather all of the pages together so the total will be 8 full pages essay

i attached you the essay (you will use it for the first 4 pages)

the PDF is the essay with the mistake that need to be correct

and the interfaith dialogues survey result (you will use it for the secnd 4 pages)