English Journal #14 | Quick Homework Help

Help me study for my English class. I’m stuck and don’t understand.

Instructions:

To begin this assignment, compose your Journal 14 answering the following prompt:

1. In response 1 # you are going to do a little surgery on a few of the sentences by employing the “Paramedic Method” ***I included the response 1 below so you can work on it***
2. Choose three sentences from your response and paste them into this Journal entry.
3. Rewrite them after following the “Paramedic Method” steps below:

• Circle the prepositions. Eliminate any unnecessary prepositions.
• Identify any references to the researchers (the doer).
• Replace references to the researchers with a passive construction that emphasizes the experiment (what was done).
• Eliminate any unnecessary slow wind-ups.
• Eliminate any redundancies.

***Write your original and revised sentences (150-250 words).

*Here is a video instruction regarding The Paramedic Method (https://youtu.be/3rhJmKGBsIw).